Pro: Abortion should be legalized
Mothers who wish to have an abortion should not be penalized for the mistakes that they have made in the past. Stated by the Supreme Court, “It is a woman’s fundamental right to make the choice to have an abortion.” Abortion cannot be considered murder because a fetus is not a human being. Having an abortion is relative to terminating a pregnancy, not a defenseless child. Also, according to Stuart W.G. Derbyshire, a senior lecturer at the University of Birmingham, fetuses cannot feel pain until birth, therefore having an abortion will not harm the developing infant. Fear of unsafe procedures during abortions are common, but modern, professional abortions are quite safe;the numbers prove that: 1 in every 100,000 women die in an abortion, while an average of about 13 women die out of 100,000 from pregnancies. Keeping abortions legal, prevents women from having to preform illegal, unsafe abortions, that may cause death and diseases because of unsterilized tools, or amateur experience; according to the World health Organization, over 68,000 deaths have occurred because of non-official abortions in countries that outlaws it. 1 in 800 babies are born with Down Syndrome, and 1 to 4000 males/1 to 8000 females are diagnosed with X syndrome; It is unfair to bring a child into the world who will face a lifetime of handicap-ability.
Having an abortion is a mother’s choice. 73% mothers who have abortions do so because their finances would not be able to support another human being, while 38% say that their baby would interfere greatly with their studies or pursuit of their career. If the mother is unable of providing for her incoming infant then it should be her choice on whether or not to keep the child. Legalized abortion lowers crime rates by 50% . When a teenager or poor parent is forced to raise a child because of a mistake he/she made in the past, they must resort to crime to pay the bills and keep the baby alive. But when a baby is raised in a crime filled neighborhood, he will grow up seeing crime all around him, and wont be able to differentiate crime from survival from unnecessary crimes. They will grow up thinking that exploiting theft, or other sorts of crimes, not because of bad parenting, but the environment they were forced to grow up in because the parent was not financially ready to support a child.They cannot bring up a healthy child because of the influences around them. By having an option to have an abortion it gives mothers a second chance to decide if they want to raise their kid in an unsafe environment.
This reads pretty smoothly, and I appreciate the approach you guys are taking here of weaving your evidence throughout your paragraphs, in contrast to the more "chunky" style of quoting I've been seeing on other teams' openers. However, the drawback here is that it is hard to tell where some of your quotes start and stop, where some of your info is coming from, etc. How would it be possible to make this clearer without sacrificing the "flow" of your paragraphs?
ReplyDeleteI was just reading an article today by a guy who writes this way really well and you can see where all his info comes from. Not on the same topic you guys are on at 'tall, but check it out for the style:
http://www.nytimes.com/2010/09/05/opinion/05rich.html